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Some Pain

I woke up at the morning
With lots hope and love
I thought you would like
Whati have written for you
But the sad part of everything
Is that if you are real good
You will not be treated very good
You have stopped communicating wid me

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  • HazelEyedGirl
    July 26
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    good


  • PainedLoner
    July 25
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    I read and responded with a message to your poem. But I am sorry that you feel that way. I have not stopped communicating with you, I just haven't heard from you.