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The Band

You talk about me behind my back
I know it's true because I've always got my back turned to you
You try to hold it in but you can't keep it back
This isn't the right way
We should never attack

Don't even think about it
That one line could kill us
The line from me to the door
The line from you to the door

But I'm not running out
I will stand and shout,
"I love you!"
I will always be here
Don't you ever fear
"I love you!"

You keep things from me
I know you do because I would use them against you
Would I rather fight than hold you tight?
No! I want love and truth!

No I'm not walking out
I will stand and shout,
"I love you!"
I will always be here
You should never fear
Please know that, "I love you!"

I'll only walk that line when you follow behind me
Oh the Lord will guide us to the best that can be

You think about me in the wrong state of mind
I think about you likewise
But I will not walk the line
I know I will always find love with you

I'm not walking out
I will stand and shout,
"I love you!"
Yes I will always be here
There is nothing to fear
"I love you!!"

Author notes

Written by Emperor MAR January 6 & 11, 2007

This is about marriage, commitment, & how both are at fault in most conflicts.

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  • cjgreene
    August 19

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    Wow. Simply wow. I absolutely loved this. It spoke absolute truth. I just...wow. Sorry, I'd love to post some profound comment...but I'm at a complete loss for words.

    Congrats!


  • babygirl2582 silver member
    July 25

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    AMAZING

    OMG! That was an amazing write!

    ("You think about me in the wrong state of mind
    I think about you likewise
    But I will not walk the line
    I know I will always find love with you

    I'm not walking out
    I will stand and shout,
    "I love you!"
    Yes I will always be here
    There is nothing to fear
    "I love you!!" )

    I felt those words deeply. And I love the fact that you showed both sides of fault alot of ppl have trouble doing that.