Wondrous amusement,
Capture the eyes of children
In the awe of life.
Singled attachments
Entice the depths of the mind
To learn of their ways.
Mildly mannered
From the joy of excitement,
For magical views.
Author notes
Idk...Kinda random really. :/ But I like it/them. ^^ Hope you enjoy!
Thank you for the syllable count website, however, it said that the sentence is only 4 syllables. So I'll just leave it as is. I'd rather it be short a syllable than long by a syllable.
Again, please enjoy.
A contest entry
- Chain Haiku by misticmoonlite.
1075 points, ended July 28, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What's your opinion?
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a cute write about life in a zoo some good insight here. thank you for sharing your fabulous talent with us. congratulations on your silver trophy. keep writing poet! God bless you always
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Nice Chain Haiku...
Congratulations on the silver trophy! Zoos are fine I guess, as long as the animals' needs are being met. So many zoos still have such small cages and inappropriate terrain for the animals; like the elephants for example.
I always loved going to zoos since I was a kid. I felt sorry for the tigers and lions when I was a child. They would pace back and forth in their tiny cages. Conditions for the animals in zoos are better now a days; but there is still plenty of room for improvement. Thank you for sharing!
Karen
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i tend to agree, the playful sight in a zoo atmosphere can be fun,,,thank you for this entry
good luck
Linda -
lovely picture, fun and delicate for a childs eyes, thank you for this entry
good luck
Linda
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Syllable counts often confuse me. I use this, it may not be accurate but at least it is consistent.
http://www.wordcalc.com/
Nice poem by the way.
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