Alone in my room
A baby plays dead
A mother is crying
All in my head
Nothing is spoken
All that is screamed
I find that sometimes
It's not what it seems
The baby is bleeding
The mother is dead
The baby is wailing
All in my head
No one can hear them
They're only here
And all that has caused them
Is never ending fear
Somewhere I hear them
Somewhere they live
I wish you could see them
So you won't misgive
Why are they here
why won't they die
even though they scream
and i hear them cry
you hear nothing
no one is here
I think that it's all
just misguided fear...
What did you think
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WOW. I actually have noi dea what to say to this. It's amazingly written, and so eerie that I actually think I started shuddering at points from the atmosphere that you created. I don't usually like rhyme but it works perfectly here, you really nailed it, methinks. Such traumatic scenes
Are you okay? 
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I'm glad you liked it. ^_^ Thanks for the applause and the hug.
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