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dunno haha drunk stupor

Drunk stupor
broken heart
sadden tears
we're apart
Loving glance
Hurtful touch
erotic sex
is too much
stoke me gently
Love me kind
give me words
that are sublime
tell me all the things you see
All the things you want in me
All the things you know I'll be
Tell me until I believe
Hold me close as I cry
on the edge of chaos
further and further from sanity
like disgusting dross
I hope that you will hold me
I hope that you will care
because one day we will lose each other
One of us won't be there
and when that day comes my love
i will still stand by your side
Somehow connected
No laws will i abide...

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