myriad unstrung gems
exhale breaths of radiance
cactus flowers reach
Author notes
desert sunset
form; japanese traditional
5-7-5
nature, zen
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A contest entry
- desert sunset haiku by piccola.
800 points, ended July 26, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I try to be concise when I write my Haiku, always open for suggestions
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love cactus flowers!
lovely
Juls
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thank you for your entry. Nice job.
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how lovely as awlays
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Very beautiful haiku about the scene, with the wonders of the desert present in every line. A delight to read on this lovely summer day!
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I know nothing about the differenc between modern and traditional besides the syllable count but I love the fragment of this piece: the intentional pause (almost like an afterthought in the first and last line.. And I like the diffrently translation I got from reading this..well thought out poet!
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