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July 24, 2009

As anyone can tell you love is
Not about your pride
Nor about yourself
Everyone that has felt love is
More about caring for than oneself
I know is the be true but also
Choose to hide my love away because
Heartbreak is the worst hurt I've
Ever felt in my life
Love doesn't heal so much as adds to
Love from the past
Each part of the broken heart
Takes new strength from love
And overcomes the fear and anguish
You can always find love because
Love is abundant from all
Of your friends, family, and lovers
Run to it

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  • Chilko
    July 27

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    I liked this one Justin...a couple parts seemed almost awkward in the way that they were worded, but maybe this was intentional? I like the feeling that this poem conveys, and the last 5-6 lines really hit home for me. I love the honesty that always comes through in your writing. Nicely done Justin.