Her beautiful green eyes,
sparkle in the sun light.
As she smiles, she giggles,
as she giggles, she wiggles,
and slowly, she falls asleep.
She looks just like her mama,
and shes stubborn like her to.
When shes angry and whining,
its always bad timing, but than...
you see her calm down, and smile!
You watch her breathe,
thankful for her every breath.
At night you read to her,
You pray and comfort her,
and slowly she falls asleep.
Author notes
For those of you that know me, I better say this first, lol, I dont really have a child. To Alicia, a big congrats to you :-) Heres my take on option 2.
-Ben Legg
A contest entry
- Sophie's Baby Book by Toxic Stardust.
600 points, ended August 7, 26 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you so much!
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Congratulations on your gold trophy! I liked this poem for the way you expressed yoru feelings about someone very special. Good show!
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lol, I had no idea you had green eyes. But blue eyes are over used, and theres a song about a "Brown eyed girl" :-P so I wanted to use eyes that are cool, but not overly talked about. :-P thats all. lol, Im glad that you enjoyed the write, I enjoyed writing this one. I look forward to hopefully being a father one day. And thought about how the good times will be sweet, sweet enough to overpower the bad. Such as the screaming and crying of the young child. Theres always the light on the other side :-) Thank you for the comment, it was appreciated :-)
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thanks so much for entering my contest! this is a really good poem! how did you know I have green eyes? lol, but seriously, I do, and in fact, I DO look a lot like MY mom...lol...I really enjoyed reading this poem, good luck!
Alicia Lynn and Sophie Lynn
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