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Everthing I Said

Sitting in his car, I’m
lying in his arms, I’m
lying there beside him
lying there right next to him and

Here I am, I’m
lying to his face, I’m
lying through my teeth, I’m
lying about everything

I said…..

I said it would be forever
I said that to be together
was all I longed for

I said…..

I said you were all I wanted
I said you were all I needed
to survive

Beckoning to me, he's
calling out my name, he's
creeping up behind me
Soon he's gonna find me

I can't say.....
Can't say that I'm sorry
Can't ask to forgive me
There's nothing to beg for,
nothing to stay for.

Crying out his name while
clinging to your heart as
mine is ripped in two, and
I just can't let go
...but I know that I have to

I said…..

I said it would be forever
I said that to be together
was all I longed for

I said…..

I said you were all I wanted
I said you were all I needed
to survive and…

Well, I lied.

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  • Euphy
    November 18
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    Wow, I think this is my favorite thing you've ever written. Ever. I. Adore. This. D: So many double meanings of words, and it flows great. You did a much better job at songwriting than I did. If I were you I'd call this "Everything I Said". What was the original title? I can't figure out who this is about either. I could guess, but I'd still rather know. Which guy is in which place? I wonder. ilu Ellen, and your poetry/songs. Bravo. :]

    -Kelsey/Euphy


    • My Silent Suicide
      November 26
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      the original title was I Said lol I think i'm gonna use your idea and add the Everything


  • TheGlassHathCometh
    August 8

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    Lol thanks Ellen, I feel better now HAHAHA!! I think it's really good, I honestly think it'd be an excellent song! It just needs the right kind of music...hmm...And yeah, I think Jerry's right. "I lied" or "False Impressions" "trick of the light" or something like that. Hmm...your song, your choice.


  • psychedelicmatthew
    July 24
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    Dude can I cover this? I like it alot. It flows so well.
    Connor, its a warning 0_o
    OH and the title needs a change. It's a Beatles song

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