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Bruises on her ego.

Another bruise,
a bloody lip,
and I'm the one to mend her ego.

Cover up and darker shades,
to hide the pain you've caused.

Icy tears, a colder heart
I'll do my best to bring her back.
She's not herself because you couldn't check your rage

I hope you know just what you've done,
and know this isn't over just 'cos you left,
you still have me to answer to.

Author notes

Not exactly "wild" but it for sure pissed me off.

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  • pkoirish
    August 2
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    very powerful

    very strong poem..... abuse is never good in any form....... Patrick


  • Paloszoo gold member
    July 29

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    This is great. I love the last line. It’s really powerful. Nicely done. Thanks so much for taking the time to enter and for writing for me. It’s an honor to read your work!