birds look frantically for mother sun
as we marvel at their hurried state
the sun slowly rises somewhere in Australia
and we kiss, cuddle & dream together
under the protection of father moon
Author notes
prompt:
"hold my hand" by daylight, deviantart
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A contest entry
- Night time Quickie! by perfectsunset.
625 points, ended July 26, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a very well put together piece. I have a feeling some other poets are inspiring you
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Very beautifully scribed.
Much love, emotion, and
tenderness to this piece.
You've expressed such
beauty. Love it.
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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