The horizon beckoned you... so you said...
you needed to explore...
to write in the “real world” as you perceived it;
but perceptions are so errant,
as well as fragile and malleable...
did you not learn that with love?
and what could possible be beyond AP, in the “real world”?
Writing for publishing deals? Nice,
and you would not need AP, if you had other sources of inspiration;
but what I’ve found here is humanity, in the multitude;
if I did not find it, it found me... did you not find me?
Well, you wish to explore, to see what is beyond the horizon,
test your limits, see how far you can go,
and it is time you get there...
but do not form static perceptions,
they are built upon illusions.
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- farewell lovely mermaid-contest for Dalaney by JinSays.
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I cant help but feel you're a bit pissed that she's left. maybe thats just the way Im reading your work. the ending line seems to be a warning to someone who won't listen...again maybe that's just me.
anyway, I thank you for taking the time to write something for her.
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thanks, Jin, this was written after she IM'd me after she left, and what her and I talked about... so this is more of an 'advice' piece, I think... she did return under another name and began writing again here, but she was discovered by former acquaintances that I guess she'd rather leave behind, so she fled that account... and I'm sure the drama will continue... for that's what it is all about...!
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eh, Im saying my goodbyes to her as I knew her.
if she decides she wants my friendship again-then so be it.
I'll just sigh and say I knew her when.
if you talk to her again, please send her my love. -
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well, her Dalaney page is showing a hopeful sign now...
signed,
the Muffin Man lol
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