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Without You

The waves roll in with a cold breeze across my pale face,
tear drops lay on the sand where love was once a trace,
chasing sunsets for years with sweet whispers in my ear,
but this is my first without you close and beside me here,
after this fall nothing makes sense to my heart anymore,
laying in fragments and rubbing my wounds black and sore.

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  • BitterDreamer
    August 4

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    this made my stomach knot up. so few words, but so much power.
    I'm so upset with my recent failed relationship--this just made me think of it..I can relate to this completely.
    "after this fall nothing makes sense to my heart anymore"
    such a true statement. NOTHING makes sense to me. Wounds so deep, can't be healed over night. oh how I wish they could.
    thanks for sharing.