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North Sunset

 Many distant hues

Windy, cold, and colorful

North tundra sunset

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7-24-09

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  • piccola silver member
    July 26
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    nice imagery and description. In traditional haiku there is no upper case or punctuation.

  • Lotus Papa
    July 24
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    great work

    i can feel the wind blowing.


  • crivanea silver member
    July 24
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    Lol! You write north, I wrote south great haiku! Love the last line and vivid description! Best wishes in the contest