Treasure my Soul
Look into my smouldering eyes
Feel a warmth surround your heart
Your very soul and embrace you
Softly I whisper your name
The gentle soothing sound of my voice
Makes you tingle all over
I take your hand in to mine
Guiding your hand to my unshaven face
As I caress your tender cheek
Your unguarded heart opens
As you feel something so special
You glow with the beauty of an angel
So my sweet….
Shall I show you the treasures
Within my very soul??
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Wonderfully written. I'm really able to feel the emotion and it is very romantic. The emotions that it evoked in me were wonderful as well...you are a wonderful writer.
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I love it
I wounderful work! This has a a lot of feeling and is just so sweet with love
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Heartfelt Edward
You write romance so well my friend. Always a delight to stop by and read your amazing poetry. Hugs and Smiles. Blessings!
Always, Sandy
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It's been a while since I've had the pleasure of reading your poetry and so, I find triple the pleasure when I come here and read a piece as beautiful as this!
You have a beauty here, hon
Keep the ink flowing!!!
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idk, how about Jackpot for a tittle? i like this piece very much so heartfelt full of love
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Ed,
Treasure My Soul...glad you took my prompt for your titile of theis poem! Fitting title for such an awesome write. Glad to see your still writing every now and then. Love the border for the poem as well. Wonderful addition to your poem collection my friend. ~Sie
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An open heart. This was just so beautiful. It felt warm and gentle. Your heart was reaching out to the one you were with and allowing them to see you with all your love unfolded before them. The photo that goes with the poem is just perfect and compliments your soft words. I loved this heaps.
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the beauty of an angel...
and that's what you share with us all.
thank you for the read today as always.
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