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The Lady of the Lake

 

 

 

 

 

The scent of blue perfume fills the air,
of goddess muse with cascading hair
when she leaves her world beneath the lake
and whispers words as the Bards bewake,
the spirit of the Eisteddfod fair.

Her stirring pot bubbles creative flair,
to tell ancient tales with Bardic care
our craft, long held dear, cannot forsake
the scent of blue perfume.

In second sight our future declare,
in lyrical verse she shows us where
our dreams meet the art of a moonquake
as we dance and sing at Merrymake
and from the depths of the Annfwn lair
the scent of blue perfume.

 

 

 

 

 

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  • maralisa silver member
    July 25
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    aw a very beautiful write I love your imagery and depth throughout thank you for sharingmaralisa


  • Nickelspring gold member
    July 24
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    Oohh, this is so lyrical, like a song skipping along. Very intriguing.
    Lovely
    K


  • cricketjeff gold member
    July 24

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    Not quite sure what blue perfume smells of, the ancient blue colouring is wode and that has one of the vilest stenches in all of nature

    My foolish musings apart a beautiful lyrical poem, and with the light touch that the French usually put into this form.

    Jeff

    • Thanking you Sah
      Oh hun I wish it was something grand and cleverly divine - Blue Perfume is simply the name of the scent I wear. The goddess of poets in Welsh legend is Ceridwen, from whom I got this name.

      Jem

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