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someone

you have become nothing
but a voice
in my room

sound echoing
off the walls

laughter, ours
yours, mine
silence, mostly yours now
(it used to be solely mine
it's funny how things
can transform
with the turn of the dial
or the span of three months)

you're a ghost in my room
or do i mean my mind
or do i mean my throat
i don't know anymore
i'm still confused
as to your geminian reasoning
and i think you still owe me
an explanation.

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  • jerusha
    July 24
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    i hurt i hurt i hurt i


  • StarEyes
    July 24
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    What a read! I love the thoughts in this one, as I think it is one that many of us can relate to, in one way or another. Great job!!