I learned of you from a friend,
of a friend,of a friend
She said you were available
And just my type
So sexy you were,
Sitting across from me
Not even paying me the
Slightest of glances
Truthfully I wore this shirt
For the way it accentuates my assets
All you have to do is look this way
And your mind will be warped
I wore these jeans
For the way they hug my assets
When I stand and turn to walk away
Flipping my hair back I gaze back
Oh so your an ass girl,
Okay well I have plenty
You lids rise and our eyes meet
I can feel it happening
Lust at first sight
Months go by and I learn more
Of your idiosyncrasies
And I learn to love you
My bitchiness makes you grin
You miss me even when I'm around
You haven't said it
But I know you love me
A contest entry
- Loving to Hate You, Hating to Love You, Loving to Love You by tinydarkgoddess.
700 points, ends December 15, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
Sincerity is greatly appreciated
Comments
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I really enjoyed this piece. It had such a playful honest and geninue feel of lust, love and relationship. The realism and humor was a perfect balance and overall wonderful read. Thank you so much for entering the contest, Best wishes!
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way to un-ravel the prompt...you wrote it wonderfully!
You have a genuine and authentic poetic voice...
honest and real....with a touch of lovely humor!
Do you sculpt? have you ever tried it...and worked at it..
you enjoy layers and texture in your writing!
I wouldn't be surprised at all if you have a secret sculptor in you!
ears/Seattle
it's so sad that Art in school is so under-taught and achieved.
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so many raw emotions
you are such a talented poet
i think the world needs more poets like you
to write from their hearts and souls
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