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The picnic.

Sitting in the grass, on an old tattered blanket.
Holding hands, thinking it.
Love is in the air, and so if the fragrance
of food from the basket of our hearts.
Joined together and intertwined.
Red wine and the finiest words said in liquid tones.
Put into a zone of loved and sacrificed misery.
Our picnic of life, the food of love, the smells and hearts, going
from our head to up above.

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  • those tattered blankets are the best to sit on. nicely done.


  • DolceVito gold member
    July 25
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    Beautiful; clever take on the prompt