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Can you keep a secret?

Love is but war,
it's normal.

And it's leaving because

you are beautiful.

One month later

and then I knew:

sleeves aren't good places for hearts, honey.

 

 

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Titles cento poem. Awesome idea mister

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  • VampireShadow
    July 24

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    This is awesome. So simply written...but it's powerful. Especially that last line. I suppose that's why it's italicized? lol. And the spunk in the word "honey"...that's just awesome. Keep it up!


    • wandyway
      July 24
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      Thank you!
      I do find that using endearments like 'honey' and 'sweetie' can be more bitter than cussing. I don't know, there's just more venom in something seemingly sweet I guess xDD

      • VampireShadow
        July 24
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        Yes, I definitely agree on that one. I can't even explain myself right now, words are esaping me. I was going to elaborate. But apparently no longer. hahah.


  • J. M. Spenser
    July 24

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    Thank you very much. And I must say this is superb. You've done wonderful. Almost as if your titles were written for this very contest. It was just meant to be. haha. Awesome job. Hope you like the next round because it's going to be alot funner. I hope. :S lol

    • wandyway
      July 24
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      Thank you for your comment mister
      I think this round was fun! It was challenging to make the titles fit together and have some meaning. Looking forward to the next one. Glad you liked >;D

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