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Ghost Of My Past

The Rain Is Falling
My Heart Is Calling
I'm Dying Inside
As My Loved Ones Died

Ghost Of My Past
Don't Take Over Me
Ghost Of My Present
Please Remember Me

This Endless Path Of My Past
Please Don't Take Over Me

These Momories Of My Past
Never go away
What Is The point I Know
I'm Not Here To Stay

The Ghost Of My Past
Can Never Let Me Go
This life I Have Is Not Going To Last
I Know It Will Soon Be So

On This Endless Path
Of The Ghosts Of My Past

Will This Never End
The Terrifying Ghosts
Of My Past
Looks Like Forever It Will Last

The Ghosts Of My Past





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  • aeolia
    August 1

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    You can definitely feel the emotion in this, and I think a lot of people on here can relate to all these emotions [sad but true]. I certainly know how it feels. Sometimes I think I'm tied to all the bad times I had and the bad people I once knew, but while you never forget, you don't have to dwell on the past. There's life ahead and at least part of life is happy... at least that's how I see it. Hope you're well

    Just a pointer, though: you don't need to capitalise every word, only proper nouns, the beginnings of sentences, etc. Of course it sounds hypocritical because I hate capitalising when I don't have to with a vengeance, but just in case you wanted to know, there it is! Haha.