Screaming out I laugh and point
I poke and prod and tell him about his flaws
He is boring & always says the strangest things
But,
To be with him I'd give anything,
His eyes so strong & so captivating,
I love him but hate is what I'm insinuating.
Author notes
Best wishes on judging.
49 words by the way... I wrote and then counted I got nervous when i got close to 50.
(that includes the & symbol)
"Love" by ~arlek http://arlek-in.deviantart.com/art/Love-30959885
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by Bright Lights.
1050 points, ended August 6, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
No question.
Comments
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Your last word should have been cock. Oh and i saw what you said to that girl and im upset. Call me.jk i love you
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Really interesting take on this prompt..
It's a tiny bit confusing.. but so is Love !
Thank you for entering !
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this kinda left me confused so i can only imagine what it must be like to be the one you wrote it about!!
i do like your writing style. peace and light, kp
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