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Love

Love,
A Miracle
Who's only name to me
Is Emily

I dread the day we part
Knowing this comes through death
Doesn't ease my worries

Forever Is all the time I want
Forever Is the only time I can't have

The yearning I have
Is in my heart
Fearing the day
Our souls do depart

Having only one thing real, left to say
I love you
Forever and more than this day

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  • what a nice love poem! you should do cards for hallmark! thanks for sharing it. keep up the great work! peace and light, kp