Look in the mirror,
Try and see what everyone
Around you sees when they
Look into your eyes.
See the beauty, the strength;
See the intelligence and
The determination; the
Will to stand on your own.
Take a look at yourself,
Why can't you see what we see?
Take a step back and look,
Really look at who and what you
Truly are. You are truly
Amazing and you should see that.
You are warm and welcoming,
You are open and outspoken.
You do not fear what others say
And you do not fear those that stand in your way.
Take a look at your self,
Why can't you see what we see?
Author notes
tonight a friend of mine and i were talking and all the doubts about myself were bugging me and he was talking about how people liked being around ma and hoe people are drawn to me... i asked him why and he wrote this... : people love and like you because you are smart beautiful you have a good personality you speak your mind you care deeply about ever last one of your friends and try so hard to make everyone you can happy you have an aura around you that is warm and welcoming and just makes people want to be around you as much as possible
as usual not what i had in mind when i first started, but as usual it cam out pretty good anyway, i might add to it later on, but thats it for it now.
A contest entry
- never forget. by samantha jean.
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Comments
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This poem speaks the truth.
This poem is amazing and beautiful!!
Great write!!!
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Yes, self-doubt is a horrid monster. Good write. You should consider more works along these lines.
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