Sober is a word you obviously dont know.
A call here or there, but nothing really matters anymore.
You said love is just a word, and alcohol is a drink.
Apperently you didnt listen, you never cared what I think.
Long nights of begging,pleading, bleeding and crying.
All along I was really dying.
No love is here, and neither are you.
You made your choice now go away,
drink some more and try to wake up another day.
Author notes
Evanessence-Sober.
A contest entry
- My Ipod--A GIANT Song Prompt Contest by Nienna Calmcacil.
1200 points, ended July 24, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Yeah be truthful!
Comments
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Wow. Bitter and powerful.
I'm a bit of a grammar Nazi, so I'll just say that the song was called "Call Me When You're Sober"--Evanescence. There, I feel better now. haha.
Anyway. Alcoholism is one of the most fatal things to a relationship...I've seen what it can do to people. Again, this was a powerful entry. Thank you for putting it in. -
this is something many will be able to relate to. great job with the prompt. good luck. thanks for sharing it. keep up the great work. peace and light, kp
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