Chaos
Commotion
Engulfing lonely hearts
Darkness shrouds perfect vision
Confusion
Conflict
Torn between morals
Lonesome men give in to
Their fleshly desires
Their most erotic of fancies
Author notes
Prompt: The world is such a polluted place
though immorality does help
In a list
A contest entry
- It's a late night quickie. by Cerulean Sunrise.
770 points, ended July 24, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I like the alliteration!
And your take on the prompt was very unique. Great work here. Good luck in the contest.
Ylova
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Thank you, thank you! Good luck to you!
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Well you don't get a whole lot more immoral than being reduced to purchasing sex!! Deliciously dirty take on the prompt!! Well done and best wishes!!
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A very unique and well penned take on the prompt! I loved the brevity and colorful verbage. A most enjoyable read, and best wishes in the comp
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Thank you
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Nicely taken from the prompt.
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I tried. :/
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You done good. k?
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Okay
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