DNYANDEEP
(LANTERN OF KNOWLEDGE)
Because the path was thorny and long,
and through a dark and lonely land,
I set upon your lips a song,
And placed a 'Dnyandeep' in your hand.
In stormy weather
In torrential rain,
I protected the flame,
From getting blown out.
Dear, O dear students,
I pass on my heritage unto you,
It's up to you now,
To keep the candle kindling…..
....Keep the candle kindling lads,
Keep the candle kindling…..
Author notes
I would like to teach clinical medicine, science
A contest entry
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I think that this piece was OK! I guess you can say! I didn't really like this piece all that well, It was good! Sorry you can't go to round 2. But thanks for entering.
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clinical medicine is not part of this school
but good luck in contest for science teacher
it is like real school grades 4 -12th grades good luck in contest
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