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fly

To fly is inhuman
i'd still love to try
if only I had wings
like an angel or  a bat
then I could fly
fly; high above the sky
I could look down into the ocean
& see that it's still beautiful
to fly is just a dream .

Author notes

hope this will work , this is what came to mind when I seen the photo : )
credit: http://nowaryesblack.deviantart.com/art/without-gravity-125297483

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  • xeroabyss II
    August 4
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    If I feel inhuman, then ought I deservingto be granted wings to fly?


  • iWritePoems
    July 28
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    wow!!! I really want to fly...and look down into the ocean. Nice job.

  • I always wanted to fly when i was younger.. I thought about it CONSTANTLY... it was like my dream and main thing. Excellent write orange!

  • Interesting the contrast between angel and bat! I think I'd rather be the bat lol... ahh to fly!

    • aha . ya being a bat would be god in all , but they here way to good & everything would be like loud sirens

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