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[ I haven't been ]

I haven't been
I haven't always been that dependable boy
Never grew up till my life was destroyed
Tore to shreads
Now i lay in this torn up bed
A bed where i close my eyes and thank thee
Right around the corner karma spanked me
Turning into the insightful man
i learned to plan
Plan a positive way of life
and stop being that cry baby thumb sucking little kid not silence by a lullaby
I glad to say i am this guy
My eyes are open wide
and ears ready to help your lives
so open up and don't hide
I will cure your problem before you die

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  • Xxpoison.kissesxX silver member
    July 24
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    Deep write, loved what you've said with this... excellent pen!