I see a space between the clouds,
and I know I can make it if I try.
Focus all my energy and soar.
So high above the world below,
the trees, the mountains..
so large down there, seem nothing to me.
Spread my wings, I'm weightless.
Nothing to fear,
no animals, no people, just me.
There's a light between the clouds,
as I burst through the airy mist
and I'm free.
Author notes
#7 Assume the position of an animal/bug and describe your world
A n g i e r i e
A contest entry
- #3 OPTIONS OPTIONS OPTIONS (adding more) by HopelessDreams.
800 points, ended July 27, 25 entries
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I'm taking it you're a bird? I like the last stanza best. Good imagery, thanks for entering
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lovely discription! i could just picture it, lovely imagery
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Thank you
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beautiful! I could feel your creativity as I read along to the words of your poem. good luck with the contest. thank you for sharing. peace and light, kp
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Thanks much!
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