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The New Girl

She comes into the classroom,
The new girl is here.
Everyone in there turns to see her.
This is what she mostly fears.

She sees it in their eyes.
They are not the welcoming type,
She walks to her desk with her name on it.
And takes a seat and thinks "Its time to ruin my life"

She quielty looked around her.
Everyone one was talking
In groups from what she could see.
She saw the cliques, jocks and the geeks and so on.
Who looked at her so hurtfully.

The bell still had not rung yet.
And it had been about 10 minutes
sine she came in.
And yet no one came near her.
"Im never gonna fit in"

The bell finally rings after another 10 minutes
"I came pretty early i guess"
She says.

The Students took their seats.
Sitting up properly.
Then the teacher calls
The New Girl.
"So this is where school starts"

The New Girl stood up,
Walking to the teacher.
Looking to the floor
And when she got there,
She faced her classmates
As they greeted her.

They had bright smilling faces
Which scared her very much.
They actually looked friendly
Compared to how they reacted at first.

The bell rang.
The students ran out
Except one.
The New Girl
Who sat in her seat
As she looked out her window to see her classmates
Laugh and Giggling.

The teach came to her
"Why are you not outside??"
The New Girl just says
"I'd rather stay inside"

The teacher leaves,
She understood.
The New Girl
Just wasn't happy.

The New Girl just sat there
"Im just a loser thats all"




















Author notes

Well, i was thinking of how i started in my new school and well it wasnt a great starting...and i just wanted to write another poem so i wrote this...And im planning on making a story on this =]

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  • kathykool
    July 30

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    cate i didn't like this poem as much as your others because it went from present tense to past tense and back again and from rhyming to not rhyming and back again but the idea was good