this is a new time.
one you've never seen,
yet
you've always felt.
two blinks
and four drinks
will set your mind
into hysteria.
time is in your
closing hand.
use wisely.
A contest entry
- Quickie by rainbows..
400 points, ended July 23, 7 entries
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Comments
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this is really good, well done with the prompt. even though it's a simple poem i really like it. i also like the end. <3.
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Wonderful.
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thank you very much (: I had extreme block with this one, but I forced out some words lol
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