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I wish I could be as pretty as her for you.
I told you I was fine
when I knew it wasn't true
I miss the way you used to call me.
when we floated apart,
I knew we werent ment to be.
if only you could see me now
and how much I've cried.
yeah, I wish you could see my poems
my heart has truely died.
and even though I still love you
all I can say was I tried.

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  • carebear123
    July 23

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    i love this...it doesnt have anger to me only sadness....i like that about it...its not in ur face but it gets ur message across just fine. wonderful write. =) <3