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In My Mind

In My Mind
In my mind things aren’t all black and white.
They’re blue like how I feel, angry when I see red, and black like my thoughts.
Made up of every color but one….
In my mind everyone’s different. But that means they’re all the same.
In my mind “fine” is not how you’re doing but a response that takes no thought.
Emotions are very confusing…..easy to read once you know how.
In my mind, not everything is as it seems. Don’t be naive.
In my mind everyone deserves a chance….maybe a second one too.
In my mind…..it’s all me.

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  • Bruised.Roses
    October 29
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    yes if you want to talk to me just send me a message and let me know what you need help with

  • Bruised.Roses
    September 5

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    beautiful and dark very expressive all in all just a wonderful write, thank you for your comment on cut me open i don't cut anymore and am very sorry to hear that you are still stuggling i do wish you luck and if you need to talk i'm here


    • BrokenAtBest
      October 12
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      you said if i needed to talk to you i could. does that offer still stand?

  • dont quite get it but good

  • your poem has a lot of meaning you express it in a simple and emontional way

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