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Unbroken Bond.

Whispers of today's kiss,
it hums a melody.
Singing for the love we share,
the bond we forever keep.

A single smile curves your lips,
towards the empty blue.
A colorful embrace,
as elevating as the midday sun.

Dance with our unity,
the passion for which we hold.
Hearts melting with pride,
as the sun slips away.

The midnight sky blossoming,
I see the glitter blinking in your eye,
beaming for what is ours.
mine&yours.
A love to preserve,
                              to treasure...
                                                  ... throughout the sun&moon.

I am worried this may be too cliche, it is about my baby boy! incredible how he has blossomed our relationship.

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  • Eusebius
    January 8

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    Yes, it is difficult to write any poetry about some aspect of love without being cliche, though I think you have largely succeeded in your effort here... so kudos to you!!!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 24, 2009
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    Oh to have such a love.. one between mother and child is even more precious!


    • beckyxmarie.
      July 26, 2009
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      Thank you, a child is an amzing gift. Would be lost without him now. Thank you for your applauses.