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Balboa


Aye, Tin Man!  Let  thy galleons  traverse
the    water,      white  sails  aflutter    with
deflowered wind!    And parade  thy Cross
through  the jungle,  draped in red    and
gold.      A perfect savagery waits for thee!
"¡Para Dios!    ¡Para Gloria!    ¡Para Oro!"
And  make those  names  good  with fresh
blood on new leaves--if thou must, indeed!
A whole world in red and gold!  Oh,  steal
what thou must  -- but know this,  Tin Man;
the    west-stretching ocean        will never
be  anything    but  blue,      blue,      blue.



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