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she's looking for something more

She's looking for something more,
She want's to see the world,
That girl is looking for the world that doesn't exist,
She was told that if she followed Ana she would have the perfect life,
She would be pretty,
People would look at her,
People would envy her,
Now she's just engulfed in unhappiness,
She's drowning in the hell that she made for herself,
Wondering just where down this road she fell into the person she has become.

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