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Individuality.

They screech a violent, spooky hymn
from their corset,
gracing leather
like a Gothic beast riding a rusted carousel.

Parents see them;
tell their children to scream
but I don't want them to,
I'm just individuality;

though rubber stools makes me feel bigger than you.

Chains strangle skeletal hooves
and reap daisies;
I won't be pushing them up
until I stomp all them down.

& children run spitting shit
swallowing tarmac from an
ambercrombie garage sale oasis.
This isn't ostentation to present;
it's just me and I'm bigger than you.

These chains and metal buckles
don't belong on my wrists;
they don't belong on stray jackets.
It's not like "killer" 's cut into their souls.
I'm just individuality.

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Platform boots.

E N S I E L U A

Curtis Leroux

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  • IxI
    August 5

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    awesome! i wont be pushing them up until i stomp them all down
    brilliant. i love the title you chose, its so fitting because even though i consider myself very original, creative and individual i still cant see my self having the balls to rock s & m gear!!!
    good luck


  • Topaze gold member
    July 28
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    A very good write
    My best wishes.

  • well i had no choice but to look in this poem, considering you have titled it with my screen name. i like it, it is dark and twisting.