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If I Tell Her How I Feel

It's been so long.
Atleast it feels that way.
That she's been gone,
and I was left astray.

I miss her so,
but this Is a secret I must keep.
For if I dont,
she might not speak to me.

She has some one new.
A fact of which I must deal.
Becuse I'll lose my chance at friendship,
If I Tell Her How I feel.

The feelings build up inside,
thats where I need to keep them.
I wish that I could die,
I dispise the act of breathin.

I pretend it doesn't hurt.
Yet it's a pain like no other.
I experienced love and lost it,
I shall never find another.

My life has always been fake.
I've only had one thing that was real.
That is my love for her.
But I'm afraid she will laugh,
If I Tell Her How I feel.

My soul bleeds for the one they call Kate

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  • Da Poet Rida
    July 23
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    Yeah. I know exactly how you feel. I lost my first love in January. I miss that intimacy and love so much too still. I don't know how long yall been broken up, but your heart will heal. My ex still runs through my mind everyday...I wish I could forget her. She is with somebody else that I once considered a friend...I know your pain...God comforts us in our pain and turmoil.


    • east efforts
      July 24
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      thank you for reading and commenting. I actually lost her in january too. we were together 5 years. i miss her so much. i just dont know. once in a while she says something that makes me believe she misses me too. and it just really confuses me.

      • Da Poet Rida
        July 24
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        Yeah, that would confuse me too if my ex kept talking to me like that. My ex doesn't want to talk to me or hear from me ever. Not to say that I was a bad boyfriend. But yeah. Your heart will heal, if you need to stop talking to her, then do it so that you can heal. But yeah, you are not the only one going through. Stay strong bruh.


  • xXMe17xX
    July 23
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    ooo deep and beautiful. check mine out x