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His Lies

He said that he loved her
he claimed it months as true
then drove hard to attack her
stripped her
whipped her


I only hope

he doesn't kill her

too late...

she's suffering, and he thinks it's
a game

yet she attempted
to surrender to her fate

he called it
she delivered it

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  • wow...a very powerful peice. i hope that its not based on a personal experience. abusive relationship are hard to deal with and even harderto get out of. and then the wounds inflicted never seem to heal completely.