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Lady Luck

Alone, I stand here
Waiting, patiently
For Lady Luck to come near
Slowly, calmly
I'm in a trance
Hypnotizing, captivating
Dreaming of my chance
Surging, pulsating
Alas, she has appeared
Menacing, graceful
And with the wind she disappears
Painless, beautiful

Author notes

Found this while cleaning my old room... Wrote it at work based on the paper it is written on.

Shall I keep my new muse or ditch it?

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  • Phallen
    July 23
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    Can i just be upfront and tell you this is the best dang poem I have ever read? Well darlin, it is.