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I wish for the day before yesterday

Laughter carries into the next room
I ask (with a half of smile)
"What's so funny Charlotte?"

"I'm just really happy" She says.

(I watched her for days sit in her room miserable)

I thought to myself [About time.]
(I wanted my friend back.)

She said "Phallen, will you give Mark back his jacket?"

(Huh?)..........

"yes, of course". I replied.

BANG.

And just like that, she was gone.

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    August 11
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    Great form and layout. Very strong and wonderful ending...a great shock and a bet heart wrenching.

    Nicely done.

    mystic


  • paper-rose
    July 24

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    Good poem, but suicide doesnt make me sad anymore. Dont think of me as heartless, but ive realized its something that happens. Ive read so many poems with suicide as a topic, and it just doesntmake me sad anymore.