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Wandering

Several of my Muse were found missing
They were alone together and clearly confused

The Hall of Mirrors they usually inhabit quiet
Their Muse Family in panic and disbelief

They opened a passage label dangerously safe
The door slammed shut behind them

Iridescent mist floated eerily around them
All doors and windows genuine imitations which led nowhere

My create-me-zone sent out original copies of "Have you Seen" pics
The mist lightened and an Exit door was revealed

Happily opening the door, a familiar passage they found
Walking quickly, they turned a corner and cheers resounded --
            they are safe and home!!

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  • that will teach them to wander into dark places the could have been lost forever


  • JoeCavedIn
    August 13

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    amazing lyrics...
    I like it
    The prospect of what this is about


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    August 10

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    Clever use of oxymorons here. I enjoyed this so much my beautiful friend. I wish I had tried this one. Thank you for such lovely lines.

    dangerously safe. LOL Oh where I could go with that ....

    Loved it. ~Pamela


  • Frogzter gold member
    July 24
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    Lol... nice usuage of the oxy's! A cute little tale to go along with. Thanks for entering and joining the fun on this one. Best wishes,

    Frogz~