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Epidural, so i cant feel

Im not whole but im half way there
Watch me free fall through the solid air
An early southern morning that I wanted to share
Looked round for you, but you’re never there

Without a whole brain I can’t think good
Not bad but not like I should
Im still young, but Im feeling older
Paranoia’s a bastard, looking over my shoulder

Epidural so I can’t feel,
Hit me fast and nothings real
Shove the needle in just don’t hit my spine
Numb me through till the end of time

Summers here and the days are long
Bit my tongue and played along
Used to be weak but im feeling strong
I can dance solo to our old song

The way of the world leaves me confused
Lied to myself so I wouldn’t feel used
Woke up strapped to a hospital bed
Buzzed the nurse in to ask if I was dead

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  • linethatstuffup
    July 29

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    last line hits hard. Haha..actually did that after I overdosed. Next question was, "what can I have for the pain" ahaha fuckin stupid


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    July 23

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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    I feel like I need to be sedated at times...just leave the world behind for a bit. I think we all get that way. You penned your feelings well in this poem!
    Welcome to AllPoetry! HOpe you're enjoying yourself on here!

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    Jeremy
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