Through the eyes of a meer moonstone
A stunning vision I do see
For all the darkness cannot atone
To something as beautfiul as thee
An angel in every sense
This angel I watch she has many a smile
Her words reflect her past and how she's fought
And how hard she tries to stay for awhile
Though the growling darkness thus rot
This angel makes her own choice
A chance for a new beginning
One that brings light anew
In dark not winning
Her hand stretches to you
And you're safe once again
Celebration of death and yet still she tries
Her warmth brings smiles and whole hearts
A light anew in mine eyes
A power that's grown off the charts
A power she doesn't realize she posesses
Oh, if I were to know you angel and be thine friend
Then perhaps I could keep you, a little star
To keep my bones to mend
To give me the courage to travel far
And I do, fair angel, have a litle piece of you
It is called frienship
And nothing could be as powerful
As that kind smile and hopeful touch
Please shine on, my starlit angel
A beacon forevermore
A contest entry
- Who am I? by Agrona.
700 points, ended July 30, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Teehee. You two are SO alike
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Gloriously Written
This poem is very brightful for me, filled with some kind of hope and peace about it. You've captured the essence of an angel fully, and I must say you did an amazing job about it .
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Stunning.
Well said, trihybrid noble.
I agree full heartedly....
Well...
(grins like a demon)
I would.
(snicker)
...if I had one.
Aptly assessed and composed.
(bows low)
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Oh...
This was so... Oh it was just amazingly beautiful... So gentle and sweet and delicate and tear worthy. Such words of wonder and beauty and I truly enjoyed it. It was marvelous and I read it a few times and each time I like it more and more. Thank you so much for this wonderful entry.
~Sera
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