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Final Knocking

The icy fog should blur no longer
Across this barren wasteland soul.
Where no heart ticks the clock worth stopping
Like my regrets will pay the toll.

Cast a spell on all who shelter'd
Wicked, timely, whore's disgrace.
Know not who will pull the stopper,
Uncork my demon's 'pon this place.

Release my vengeance swift and narrow
Heinous as the raven flies.
That two crows caw the final knocking;
Broke the silence from mine eyes.

See this earth how wrapped in thunder,
Steady in it's raped cuccoon.
Bursting forth from ancient slumber
Breaks red dawn from nature's womb.

Bathe in golden blush's fallen
Like the angel's harp may dip.
Once upon a time in meadow's
Where two lovely rose's kissed.

It's here in secret fairytales
And ever after lullaby's,
I sing to you my sorry dreams;
Forevermore I say goodbye.

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  • I really liked this piece. Lovely style.

  • you really have a gift for writing. thank you for sharing it. good luck with this in the contest. i think you should do very well. peace and light, kp