Waste And Wasted., Sleep Tight,
You Raging Baastard,
Off The Light, Slip Into Night,
And I’ll Be Out Getting Plastered.
Chance Was Never Where You Placed It,
So We’ll Fuuck, Get Waste And Wasted.
Drink Up Baby, Down It With A Single Take,
Time Is Precious, Soon The Sun Shall Wake,
Sunrise Will Kill This Party Scene,
Of A Waste And Wasted Theme.
Chance Was Never Where You Placed It,
So We’ll Fuuck, Get Waste And Wasted.
10 Pint Fights Are Breaking Out,
Teenage Flicks Are Making Out,
This Darling Is The Life You Desired,
Pick Up The Pace, No Time For “Tired”
Chance Was Never Where You Placed It,
So We’ll Fuuck, Get Waste And Wasted.
Broken Bottles, Empty Cans,
Misplaced Goods, And Raging Hands,
Chance Was Never Where You Placed It,
So We’ll Fuuck, Get Waste And Wasted.
Author notes
nothing suites depression better,then gettin fuked and wasted...
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wow
i likede that one. u av a talent for rhyming x
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as usual, epically good. damn... i love ur work.
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Nice,sounds just like me a few years ago!Good write.
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As Usual, You're D-BEST!!!!
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ur faar too kind dan, lol btw yesterday i was watching a film called "The Mighty Heart" it has angelina jolie in it, but yh i wa watching it and it reminded me of u, and i actually started to cry at the thought of sumthink like tht happenin to you, wen u watch the film u'll understand!, lol its reli saddd...
thanks again 4 ur wonderful comments! :-)
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I think the use of "get waste and wasted" is extra strong since I considered it as "we are also wasting our lives as we get drunk". I think the capitals and the use of "raging" made this more of an angry poem rather than just someone whining about what they see. I think it's good, since the rhyming was not forced and you did not drag anything along. I envy your talent
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thankss!, u envy my talent?, LOL do u not aknowledge urs!?, yeah this is meant to be a kind of angry poem, but not about me whining at ppl getting wasted, its more me angry with myself for always turning to that lifestyle when things go wrong in life.
thankss 4 reading and 4 ur comment xxxx :-)
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i totally agree with that! very well written! excellent job!
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hehe thanks :-)
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