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Sweet

Sweet
Sweet dissonance
That is our love

Sweet
Sweet rememberance
And things to come

My fingertips have memorized your terrain
Any other, oh
Just wouldn't feel the same

I fit into your curvature just right
Let's make our own overture tonight

With sweet
Sweet dissonance
That is our love

And sweet
Sweet rememberance
And things to come

My eyes intake you like before they've never seen
Are you god?
Are you mortal?
Or somewhere in between?

The universe, it shakes at our demands
Tonight we hold the future in our hands

Sweet
Sweet dissonance
That is our love

Author notes

a song i wrote for a friend. if the tempo seems off, that's why. hope you enjoy. :-)

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Legend silver member
    September 10

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    I read the poem first as i always do before listening to the recording I loved the worded version but have to say it took on a whole new meaning placed to music. You have a wonderful country sounding voice that lends itself so well to this types of song But why would it not you wrote it so it is bound to be you
    Excellent I really did enjoy both the read and the performance


  • Ryan gold member
    July 25

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    WOW

    Let me start by saying I miss you anabanana, and you need to come over for a drink sometime! haha This was another excellent sillhouette of a beautifully put together song!!! Can't wait to hear it! "Sweet" just doesn't seem right to me though, because I think this is more then sweet. It's extrodinairy! lol, love ya ana darling!~