Flashing lights cry out to me
But I can't hear what theyre saying
Im floating in oblivion
Brakes Screetch to a halt
To let me pass
Why?
I don't regret trying to
I just regret that it didn't work
Maybe the ground calling me from a seventh storey window
It shouts my name
Loud and Clear
They say its all over about a second before you know
Shit happens.
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ending = love.
build up to ending = love.
it flowed really well
absolutely awesome. imagery was tops.
It shouts my name
Loud and Clear
They say its all over about a second before you know
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thank youu <3 and thanks for the contest entry it was really good i reckon we might have a winner
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its kay..
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