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Rainbow

Bright sun and dark clouds
Marriage of rain, radiance
Vibrant arc in sky

Author notes

This inspired the longer poem I posted, 'The Marriage of Rain and Radiance':
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5558939
But this haiku itself was inspired, obviously, by the thought of a rainbow.

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  • VelvetWings
    July 23
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    It reads like a haiku but somehow doesn't look like one XD
    I think because of the length of first and second lines...
    Anyway, it's really pretty *_*
    ~Sparrow


  • RaJean
    July 23
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    Simple but expressive.